Hey @davydodat,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'DO YOUR THING '! π₯
The rhyming is well put together. β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! π
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @davydodat, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'DO YOUR THING '! π₯ The rhyming is well put together. β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! π We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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