Wassup @janusmane,
Thank you for sharing 'The story My past - Lil jane' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us:
There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ
This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ
Make sure to remember your โwhyโ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Wassup @janusmane, Thank you for sharing 'The story My past - Lil jane' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ Make sure to remember your โwhyโ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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