When I'm Smoking

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tคเl๏г๒lคςкђєคгt

4 years ago

dope follow me on my journey bro 🔥🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯

David Rodriguez

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4 years ago

Thank you I freestlye all my tracks in this studio and it's getting great.

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @davidrodriguez.7290828, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'When I'm Smoking'! 💥 Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? Make sure to remember your “why” when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

E.B.E.Tony blake

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

QueenVirgo(Black Sheep Family)

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Wacco Hyp

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

TRAPIANNA

6 months ago

GANG GANG 🤘 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥