Wassup @kdbeachem,
Thank you for sharing 'Battle of My OWN' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us:
Feelin' the bars here, we like it! The mix needs a lot of work the beat is too loud fam. Great rhyme scheme, love how the passion stands out! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Love the natural sounding flow here. Props for freestyling. Very cool! 🎶
Good choice of beat! Amazing integration with the strings!🎼
“Visionary things so clearly tho take a look around see the snakes up on the ground”
This one is dope fam! Really good lines in this track!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
This beat is on another level, got me in the zone! 🔥❄️ Juicy! 🍉 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Wassup @kdbeachem, Thank you for sharing 'Battle of My OWN' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Feelin' the bars here, we like it! The mix needs a lot of work the beat is too loud fam. Great rhyme scheme, love how the passion stands out! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Love the natural sounding flow here. Props for freestyling. Very cool! 🎶 Good choice of beat! Amazing integration with the strings!🎼 “Visionary things so clearly tho take a look around see the snakes up on the ground” This one is dope fam! Really good lines in this track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯