Hey @zplayer,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Zplayer_pick_up_the_pen'! π₯
We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
Good choice of beat! πΌ
The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @zplayer, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Zplayer_pick_up_the_pen'! π₯ We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. π Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Good choice of beat! πΌ The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
great job with this track... keep up the good work
Keep dropping that fire and never give up
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