Hey @buddiethagreat,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Revenge'! π₯
There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin'
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @buddiethagreat, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Revenge'! π₯ There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! We like the underlying theme behind the bars! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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