Hi there @dexterpatterson.7381445,
Here's some feedback on your track 'scat_pack_and_track_hawk', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi there @dexterpatterson.7381445, Here's some feedback on your track 'scat_pack_and_track_hawk', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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