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- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π―
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Yo @justinatkinson! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'you can't eva take my soul '! π₯ "It seems we would rather kill each other than teach each other" some deep messages here, we like your message! π―Your bars are good, keep it up! π There's a nice concept here running through the track, nice job. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Keep working on that audio quality, the bars lack some clarity, and there is a general fuzzy noise that reduces the overall listening experience! This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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