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Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @jefferyjohnson.7403395, We appreciate you sharing 'Yb5 _YellaOnDaBeatz_' with us! π₯ You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat choice is great for you! πΌ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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