hey there bro amazing song bro sick flow cruddy flow with the song and the music is awesome and the song is mint and on point bro sick flow cruddy flow with the song and the music is great
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @keithgoins447,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Darling of my heart '! ๐ฅ
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. ๐
You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. ๐
You have a lot of talent and this track shows this. Your bars are hard hitting and we can hear the passion in your delivery. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it!
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
I like this and the direction you took is what caught my attention great job my brother pretty catchy as well
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ
Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ
Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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๐ฅ ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
hey there bro amazing song bro sick flow cruddy flow with the song and the music is awesome and the song is mint and on point bro sick flow cruddy flow with the song and the music is great Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @keithgoins447, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Darling of my heart '! ๐ฅ Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. ๐ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. ๐ You have a lot of talent and this track shows this. Your bars are hard hitting and we can hear the passion in your delivery. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
๐ค Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
I like this and the direction you took is what caught my attention great job my brother pretty catchy as well Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
nice hook keep up the grind ๐ Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
I fw this song hard asf ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Keith keep going in. Always be you bro real message here Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Great ๐
keep trying he writing and get better Delivery: Nice ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐