Wassup @herkv,
Thank you for sharing 'Ice' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. π
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @herkv, Thank you for sharing 'Ice' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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