Ok this fire. Delivery is perfect. Bars are perfect. I canβt say anything this is what is this this is a song! Iβ¦ itβs hardcore
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Hey @molassesmalone!
Thanks for sharing 'DeAd ro$e' with us! π₯
Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
This beat is working well for you! πΌ
The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Ok this fire. Delivery is perfect. Bars are perfect. I canβt say anything this is what is this this is a song! Iβ¦ itβs hardcore Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
part 2 coming next new beat 2nd verse added wasn't even gna drop this so I really appreciate the love and feedback
Hey @molassesmalone! Thanks for sharing 'DeAd ro$e' with us! π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π This beat is working well for you! πΌ The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Fantastic Bars and flow to your voice π Really catchy track and real head bopper . Great work , keep it up π
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