What's up @flyawaybemo,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at ' In Another Life'! π₯
Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Your timing is great, nicely done. π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @flyawaybemo, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at ' In Another Life'! π₯ Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Your timing is great, nicely done. π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. β With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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