I am about to shine
I am on another level, They gotta play catch up, I'm gonna never give up Right now I got next up, I got my eyes on Christ Sunday John kamale Record his first track knowledge is the key Word to the wise, Before you even try, This is just a taste, I'm about to shine, Light so bright, That it might leave you blind, determine so great, That it can't be denied, So lend me your ears, And check out my raps You've been blessed by the best, Thanks for your time
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
What's up @sundayjohnkamale, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'I am about to shine '! ๐ฅ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. ๐ This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done! Make sure to remember your โwhyโ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. ๐ค All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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