Hey @teleahclark,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'In Control', here are our thoughts π₯
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @teleahclark, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'In Control', here are our thoughts π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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