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Hey @tonymolbar, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'el neto loko mi carnal'! π₯ There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. π Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. πΆ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Make sure to remember your βwhyβ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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Work on the volume button when you making a collab and collab with me you got that flow like you can get us to the top ranks with good lyrics for this RapFame Thang We call famous Artist and Rappers from all over the world. I hope and pray for better things to come in store for you and your freestyle career. Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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Hi @tonymolbar! Here's a couple tips for your track 'el neto loko mi carnal'! π₯ 1. Take some inspirations from a range of generes and styles, this way you can create a sound truly unique to you! 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! π 3. Adding some light studio effects on your vocal tracks to really give your track body and fullness, try it out! 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! Try using J4J to see what others think of your tracks! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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