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We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life!
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Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
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Hey @OneTakeTec, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Beauty Is Her Name'! π₯ You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Make sure to remember your βwhyβ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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