Hi there @rickyyy,
Here's some feedback on your track 'OTIWBY (Official Mix)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars!
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
Dope track fam! Love the mix you came with! Really smoov track!
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi there @rickyyy, Here's some feedback on your track 'OTIWBY (Official Mix)', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Dope track fam! Love the mix you came with! Really smoov track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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