Hey @ogrekelme!
Thanks for sharing 'first tryout 1' with us! π₯
Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Loving the beat selection, good ear!
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
We like the creativity, keep on shining and we can't wait to see what you got next!
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @ogrekelme! Thanks for sharing 'first tryout 1' with us! π₯ Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Loving the beat selection, good ear! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. We like the creativity, keep on shining and we can't wait to see what you got next! Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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