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We appreciate you sharing 'Fashion (22:07:41)' with us! π₯
Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! π§
Good bars here, defo works here! π Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot.
Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @ifrfcw0gsx, We appreciate you sharing 'Fashion (22:07:41)' with us! π₯ Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! π§ Good bars here, defo works here! π Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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