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We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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If thatβs your girl she is beautiful I would be the same way showing her off if sheβs yours you got every right to show her off and keep grinding you got some really really good potential I could see you doing some big things in the future keep grinder
Hey @aaquashablakeney, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Bunni '! π₯ Strong bars on this, keep it up! π Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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