Hey @officialstlewis,
We appreciate you sharing 'sorry for the delay... ๐คฆ๐พ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ' with us! ๐ฅ
Quiet ๐คซ - make sure you record in a quiet place and make sure you use those ๐ง for the best results.
Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
Your bars have passion behind them and we know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. The recording quality on this one is letting you down. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible!
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
You got too much rhymes. You trying to rhyme a lot. Let yo shit breathe so we can hear you.
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Impression: Great ๐
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Hey @officialstlewis, We appreciate you sharing 'sorry for the delay... ๐คฆ๐พ๐๐ฅ๐ฏ' with us! ๐ฅ Quiet ๐คซ - make sure you record in a quiet place and make sure you use those ๐ง for the best results. Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. ๐ผ Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Your bars have passion behind them and we know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. The recording quality on this one is letting you down. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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