Tragic freestyle

Name: Tragic freestyle
Description: “ Remember I was young, wishing on a star, remember I was short, I just wanted to be tall, used to watch Jordan, shit I was really tryna ball, seen scar face and thought I’d turn into a boss…”

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“ Remember I was young, wishing on a star, remember I was short, I just wanted to be tall, used to watch Jordan, shit I was really tryna ball, seen scar face and thought I’d turn into a boss…”

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @tragicsp215, We're gonna review your track 'Tragic freestyle '. Let's get it! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Your bars have passion behind them and we know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. The recording quality on this one is letting you down. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

CodyHuntsman

4 years ago

Joyner Lucas instrumental interesting choice Good work with it

Ace Cambino

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Lilvirgo

4 years ago

okay now this is dope! 🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

jflames.4996

5 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥