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Thank you for sharing '09 - black man ' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix!
There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨
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Smooth delivery here too, keep it up! πΆ
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!
Try adding some vocal effects (like autotune & reverb) to really help your vocals shine through! β¨
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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trap teacher album. Black man produced by me featuring Coach Lo
u got a π₯ poetry vibe man π―π¨π€
Wassup @trapteacher, Thank you for sharing '09 - black man ' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix! There's some nice lyricism in here, good stuff. Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Smooth delivery here too, keep it up! πΆ We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track! Try adding some vocal effects (like autotune & reverb) to really help your vocals shine through! β¨ Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
right on yall. This shit is so real and rare now days
black man for life
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