What's up @deezybotha,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'when you die'! π₯
Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic?
Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
We like the creativity, keep on shining and we can't wait to see what you got next!
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @deezybotha, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'when you die'! π₯ Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! We like the creativity, keep on shining and we can't wait to see what you got next! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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