demented

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @JonathanJones.8, Thank you for sharing 'demented' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: This track has a dope rhythm to it. Great flows! "They say I'm crazy yeah I'm nuts and I called them up (ch ch ch ch), the way I target them I'm playing darts" respect the ideas you spinnin on this one & the alliteration! Really gets us in the vibe! Your adlib game is on point! Your adlibs are just a bit high in volume at times tho, try turn them down a bit! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Those violins are bobbin and weaving on this one! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 - Try switching up the cadence, your flow is dope, but sometimes you just miss a tiny bit! We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dess

4 years ago

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😵ECKOHOMIE😵

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

PURE ONE DA DVS ONE😜

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Blaze Shmoke

4 years ago

🔥 Bars: Good 💛 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Nice 🌟