Shot em
Yea I’m just a kid and I’m trynna make it out gonna go big I ain’t got no doubt Only fourteen yea I’m just a young teen and really big dream Surrounded by hoes this ain’t no scheme With this song gonna make yo girl cream Thoughts In my head Trynna make some bread Shot yo man had dat boy dead Police pull up they said freeze Ran out the door And grabbed my keys Seen him dead yo heart was tore Better remember Young D ain’t poor Yea we gone climb All the way to the top Yea I ain’t black I’m white as crack All my money come In a big sack Better be looking when we on yo block Just like geese we come in a flock Back to yo man there blood On his shirt Yea when we shot he hit da dirt Seen him fall and da ops gotta call Ask me where I’m goin said I’m goin to da mall Yea I’m just a kid trynna get out Gonna go big ain’t got no doubt You don’t know what we about Down here in da 205 Get in the car We ain’t going for a drive I got that gas Leave you passed Yo man In school Bc he just got classed Dang this gas Make you go fast I remember my past Leave them behind They couldn’t see Because they was blind When we get famous The ones that left gone be nameless They call me YB bc I be shameless Yea we trynna go all the way to the top Maybe this shi won’t flop Betta get up out my way Rollin down the street headed to slay When I get the he gone pay Tell little boy I’m On my way!
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Hi there @hittingdif69, Here's some feedback on your track 'Shot em', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Quiet 🤫 - make sure you record in a quiet place and make sure you use those 🎧 for the best results. Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 We're digging your flow on this one, the skill and confidence is clear. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 YO this junt cool bro! Really good job! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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sound great brother and I can't wait to hear your next trackrelease peace
great job with this track... keep up the good work
Hi @hittingdif69! Here's a couple tips for your track 'Shot em'! 💥 1. Try recording a freestyle vid next! Here you can really show the rest of the app your true passion for rap! 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 4. With effects, less can sometimes be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! For some Feedback on your music Send Your track to Hot! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎
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