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Trap Rap

Trap Rap

130 Plays

03 Jul 2022

THIS A FREESTYLE LYRICS WRITTEN AFTER FOR YALL #rapfame_ar_team #rapfamebest #okILLWHITEYRECORDS this life is forced on us we all gotta live it they Killin for the commas and dying for them digits done took so many losses up I ain't givin try an move more cautious I know they out here killin I know Im livein lawless but no I ain't no villian i gotta keep a rocket though incase they try in kill me there ain't nobody flawless come close some of these woman but don't do no falling no cuz love ain't my mission I just want the dollars so I'm whippin in the kitchen wanna be a Baller rack up a couple million buy a house for mama college funds for my children went thru so much trauma got shot it almost killed me but I believe in karma that pussy had to get it phantom of the opera masked up with a glizzy u know somebody popped em don't know who did it 45 prolly dropped em hit him in his kidneys the dome shot prolly gottem though it smoked em like a chimney hope he rest in pieces and I hope God forgive me don't fuck with polices and u kno i ain't admitting just prosecutor teasin yea u kno they wanna get me my neck n wrist they freezing my palms they so itchy my money it's increasing got love for my city rockin louie v fleeces and a glock with a switchy im my brothers keeper my nieces they so pretty you try an be a creeper I'll hit u with the fifty I don't fear the reaper but we all born guilty there prolly ain't a heaven it's prolly all goes black built up so much aggression I don't ever lack I'll turn u to learn a lesson he runnin like its track so many blessings and sins Im payin back I want that blue cheese im dressing Dior black this claren it ain't leased got a draco on my lap admit that imma beast lil white boy can rap and that's no cap my shit snap and if u like smoke crack then u should visit my trap catch me shootin craps blowin on some pack just watch how u act don't u disrespect or you'll end up on ur back

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2 years ago

Hey @okillwhitey, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Trap Rap'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Try improving your recording quality if you can. Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them. The emotion is real in this one, we can hear your passion.💜 Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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