Hey @newlife419,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'leave_him_alone'! π₯
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @newlife419, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'leave_him_alone'! π₯ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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