Boi

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Real recognize real when you the starter it broke my fuckin heart tge day i lost my father each day seems the same seconds pass to hours I was at the funeral but I forgot your flowers hold up let me watch my step before my life's all fucked up and there ain't nothing left I almost gave up threw in the towel i took off and walked for miles that boy gon get ya right after the 1st taste another wasted life still stuck in last place I hate when I feel like this miserable and suicidal no hope left in society no friends only rivals I gotta keep it going can't stay stuck in the mud that fuckin H will take ya now i stick to smoking bud ain't no more fuckin needles piercing my GODDAMN skin again that's the hope anyway oh please God make it end

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N9neLives

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4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @9lives304, Thank you for sharing 'Boi' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 We can feel the aggression and anger in the way you rap! This is real powerful! 💪 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. 🌠 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The vocals are nicely recorded, soundin' clean! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Scotty01

4 years ago

sad words ..but brilliant too ..I feel ya G ..I know that pain bruva I tasted the magic Adicted is my middle name ..I just smoke bud now RESPECT ON YOUR MESSAGE AND YOUR TRACK GOOD LUCK N GODBLESS Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Notawkfatc

1 month ago

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8 months ago

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8 months ago

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Pop-Sicle

9 months ago

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