Hi there @jermeliawilliams.7314386,
Here's some feedback on your track 'hotel trap', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§
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Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track!
Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying.
Yo love the energy you came with on this!
Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
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Hi there @jermeliawilliams.7314386, Here's some feedback on your track 'hotel trap', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§ Lit bars, keep 'em comin. π Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. Yo love the energy you came with on this! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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