Hey @JaylanTyler,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Don’t play with coke', here are our thoughts 💥
Your bars are good, keep it up! 🙌
You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track!
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
Fix up the bugs from your microphone cuz it’s kinda distracting when it comes to listening to your song. Other than that I like the melodic route you’ve taken. The song seems like a vibe. Keep up the grind 🙏🏽 Much love from Ny ‼️❤️
Bars: Dope 🔥
Delivery: Nice 🌟
Impression: Great 🎉
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Hey @JaylanTyler, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Don’t play with coke', here are our thoughts 💥 Your bars are good, keep it up! 🙌 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Fix up the bugs from your microphone cuz it’s kinda distracting when it comes to listening to your song. Other than that I like the melodic route you’ve taken. The song seems like a vibe. Keep up the grind 🙏🏽 Much love from Ny ‼️❤️ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Great 🎉
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