What's up @richardrodriguez.7100970,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Richard Rodriguez - new botch #thought2full_'! π₯
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic!
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
The recording quality is good, nicely done! β Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged!
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @richardrodriguez.7100970, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Richard Rodriguez - new botch #thought2full_'! π₯ Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ The recording quality is good, nicely done! β Have a play around with the FX studio. It's not quite right but there's lots of ways to use them. Don't be discouraged! Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! π We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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