Yo @st6mt0ilpg,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Jay kid -my gun'! 💥
Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic.
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Jay kid -my gun
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Yo @st6mt0ilpg, It's time for us to take a look at 'Jay kid -my gun'! 💥 Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Keep dropping that fire and never give up
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