Hey @slxmee_2x,
We appreciate you sharing ' Bread $$$' with us! π₯
The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound.
Your rhyming is tight. β¨
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Effects are working well for this track! β
The track has great melodies and it sounds great, a little more flow variety and this would really pop off.
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @slxmee_2x, We appreciate you sharing ' Bread $$$' with us! π₯ The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Effects are working well for this track! β The track has great melodies and it sounds great, a little more flow variety and this would really pop off. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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