Great build up
Letโs go
Nice vibe
Beat fire
You cooking this jawn
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Started at 12
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ
Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @richardmartin.6862114,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'GRIMPASSIONSICK'! ๐ฅ
Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. ๐
Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro!
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ผ
This is a good take fam but we definitely would like to see an up in recording quality before we give it a feature. The vocals are a bit too messy and mudded out by the beat. Also the flow could use a bit of work. It's a little bit all over the place and the punch ins are very obvious.
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
But Iโm a keep it a buck Iโm a thorough ass motherfucker Iโm old-school and I like your track follow me Iโll follow you Tommy guns 2 guns ๐ช๐ผ up โฌ๏ธ to guns tucked
Yโall earned my salute
I fuck with it , Itโs hard to find a decent producer Iโve been through a few producers and theyโve all been snakes like making you think youโre headed to table when
They get all have hidden agrndaz they Medusa ๐
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Great build up Letโs go Nice vibe Beat fire You cooking this jawn ๐ค๐พ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Started at 12 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Please check out #downbybo and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @richardmartin.6862114, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'GRIMPASSIONSICK'! ๐ฅ Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. ๐ Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ผ This is a good take fam but we definitely would like to see an up in recording quality before we give it a feature. The vocals are a bit too messy and mudded out by the beat. Also the flow could use a bit of work. It's a little bit all over the place and the punch ins are very obvious. You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
nice beat selection, nice flow and the delivery Ison point
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But Iโm a keep it a buck Iโm a thorough ass motherfucker Iโm old-school and I like your track follow me Iโll follow you Tommy guns 2 guns ๐ช๐ผ up โฌ๏ธ to guns tucked Yโall earned my salute
I fuck with it , Itโs hard to find a decent producer Iโve been through a few producers and theyโve all been snakes like making you think youโre headed to table when They get all have hidden agrndaz they Medusa ๐
keep grinding๐ฏ๐ฏโฝ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐