Hey @shawnplatinum,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'NEW LYRICS '! 💥
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠
This beat choice is great for you! 🎼
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. You know how to spit hard over the beat. You just need to improve on your sound quality as your bars are a bit fuzzy in this mix.
Hey now, you got it! We're real impressed with this. 🔥
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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good vibes good Flow stay lit stay grinding 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @shawnplatinum, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'NEW LYRICS '! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. You know how to spit hard over the beat. You just need to improve on your sound quality as your bars are a bit fuzzy in this mix. Hey now, you got it! We're real impressed with this. 🔥 Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
thank you everybody is your new lyrics I just wrote just trying to get feedback thank you so much
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