Bottom#2 Just4PlayPlay
started from da bottom sittng at this table now im countin up profits you said you ball hard but got no ring i guess you john stockton look it was way back back when i use to wear wave caps posted up by the bus where the stain at YardBlock Leland where my Gang at this me playing around kuz i cant rap Og said fuck em just name stack ever seen a big hole where brains at never knew what he meant when he said that look started at the bottom siting at this table now im counting up profits you said you ball hard but got no ring i guess you john Stockton (x2) look late nights breaking curfew i remember being locked out posted up on da block wit my right hand serving fiens when da cops out getting barked on by older heads cuz the money had to reroute go to church on a sunday for my sins imma scream and shout
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I know it may sound trash.. I am not a rapper nor am I trying to be! I just gave something a try on my FIRST DAY OUT/HOME. appreciate any and all feedback
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this song is very powerful keep going with the the heat
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