Hey @2b.patperrph,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'patPERrph - DzrvMore FS', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
Strong bars on this, keep it up! ๐
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. ๐ถ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. ๐
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible!
Talent + hard work = great rap! And you got it!! Seriously impressed with this, now get back in the studio and keep makin' tracks!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @2b.patperrph, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'patPERrph - DzrvMore FS', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Strong bars on this, keep it up! ๐ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. ๐ถ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Talent + hard work = great rap! And you got it!! Seriously impressed with this, now get back in the studio and keep makin' tracks! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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