father's day
Grayson Xp22 Plays
•19 Jun 2022
Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.
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Hey @graysonxp, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'father's day'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Not bad i say just go easy on the voice effects, definitely would be better. Because we can’t really hear ya that much. Other than that good stuff man
💯🌟🔥 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK FAM RT G SALUTE FAM FWM #ROYALTYRADIO
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