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The vocals here are bit loud, try turn 'em down a lil' to get that mix perfect.
Your bars are good, keep it up! π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'!
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
This is super chill, a real nice vibe. π
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @justinblackmon, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Maintain Focus 2'! π₯ The vocals here are bit loud, try turn 'em down a lil' to get that mix perfect. Your bars are good, keep it up! π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π Great beat choice, really works with the track! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. π There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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