Hey @richardrodriguez.7100970,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to ' - music now', here are our thoughts π₯
Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! π§¨
The recording quality is good, nicely done! β The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance.
The lyricism and subject matter could definitely be elevated to a higher level and there are some mixing issues, but this is a strong start!
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @richardrodriguez.7100970, Thanks for the submission, we listened to ' - music now', here are our thoughts π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. β¨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 𧨠The recording quality is good, nicely done! β The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance. The lyricism and subject matter could definitely be elevated to a higher level and there are some mixing issues, but this is a strong start! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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