Hey @dondonfrancisco,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Presence….'! 💥
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @dondonfrancisco, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Presence….'! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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