Yo @kypgartj2s!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Lock Down (19:11:49)'! π₯
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track!
Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @kypgartj2s! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Lock Down (19:11:49)'! π₯ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! π The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! πͺ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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