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Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'IM DA MAN (DEZ DENIRO)'! π₯
The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound.
You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Good choice of beat! πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
This track needs a bit of work. We can hear your passion for rap and we like the energy. However, the recording quality has really let you down. If you can work on this and ensure your vocals are crisp we know your tracks will live up to their potential!
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
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What's up @DezalonPhillipMann, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'IM DA MAN (DEZ DENIRO)'! π₯ The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Good choice of beat! πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. This track needs a bit of work. We can hear your passion for rap and we like the energy. However, the recording quality has really let you down. If you can work on this and ensure your vocals are crisp we know your tracks will live up to their potential! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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