Hey @damarionhurst,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Slow jam '! ๐ฅ
Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ
Good job with the audio quality, this sound clean. โ
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! ๐
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @damarionhurst, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Slow jam '! ๐ฅ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. ๐ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ Good job with the audio quality, this sound clean. โ Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! ๐ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
10 across the board, studio this bihhh Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Official track coming soon
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ