Hey @stevesimmons,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'redeem my li'! π₯
Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic!
Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
Good choice of beat! πΌ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @stevesimmons, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'redeem my li'! π₯ Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Good choice of beat! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
keep ot coming yo stay on that grind keep on the ππ―π
nice speed up the beat a little bit to match your vocals
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