Hey @oupoukie,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'I_m_not_scared'! π₯
Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π
Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! π
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @oupoukie, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'I_m_not_scared'! π₯ Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Good choice of beat here! πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! π We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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