my brother you were dropping fire with this freestyle keep going hard Marco Jones the third I really felt like you came in and did your thing with your creativity and good energy I hope to see you support my music as well
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Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'go getta freestyle '! π₯
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. π
Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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my brother you were dropping fire with this freestyle keep going hard Marco Jones the third I really felt like you came in and did your thing with your creativity and good energy I hope to see you support my music as well Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Hey @cheifwest, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'go getta freestyle '! π₯ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. π Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great beat choice, really works with the track! You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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