Music Criminal (15:43:35)
Emmy Sbraggia28 Plays
โข09 Jun 2022
You never call me back so I started rhyme instead of crying yea a a ooooo o yea all right you know my arms are sweaty palms are a heady you know it is always this way and I donโt want this to end but it is like mom spaghetti but my foot is heavy Like mom spaghetti yea she always says the opposite wen I am not there so skirt wow like tick tick tick I am sad and made and tick tick tick.
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Hey @rl3jse0qhp, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Music Criminal (15:43:35)', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง Your bars are good, keep it up! ๐ We like the rhymes in here, good job.โจ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. ๐ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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