Music Criminal (15:43:35)
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You never call me back so I started rhyme instead of crying yea a a ooooo o yea all right you know my arms are sweaty palms are a heady you know it is always this way and I donβt want this to end but it is like mom spaghetti but my foot is heavy Like mom spaghetti yea she always says the opposite wen I am not there so skirt wow like tick tick tick I am sad and made and tick tick tick.
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You never call me back so I started rhyme instead of crying yea a a ooooo o yea all right you know my arms are sweaty palms are a heady you know it is always this way and I donβt want this to end but it is like mom spaghetti but my foot is heavy Like mom spaghetti yea she always says the opposite wen I am not there so skirt wow like tick tick tick I am sad and made and tick tick tick.
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